Aha! Usually the one word you need is the one to have the ties released! But this sounds better! I am glad tickling is going on. k.
Oh - the title works so perfect here, but that word that ties you.. and that tickling is exactly when it starts isn't it?
Thats the beauty of understanding!
Silk scarves work for me, hee hee hee. So too that one word that turns the world upside down.
I'm so glad you went with that title; I love being exposed to new information.I presume the "one word" would be your name, spoken dreamily in the middle of the night. Very romantic capture of marriage. I like that this is short; it allows me to draw out words within words, like "carves," "ilk," and "tick." Even "ends" could have multiple meanings.
I like the way you have shared a scene with so few words! And, I think, you have written it in a way that the reader can run with it and complete the details in one of numerous ways!
So much of what love is seems to get covered by the fatigue of living, yet can be revealed with the right kind of breath...the turn of a move. And it doesn't take a 500 page volume to get to what matters, as you show here.
to quote you ~"In the arms of our love,we find all our basic needs met."and hopefully a few extra desires as well....
Oh wow! hedgewitch has really said it better than I ever could. This packs a punch!mindlovemisery
Nice! a sensual scene, a loving scene created with just a few words. Imagination fills in the rest. And in the "arms of our love, we find all our basic needs met".....so very true! Hayes Spencer is KanzenSakura
Very impressive brevity, passion, & truth in this gem; nice reference to the Asian/Indian love techniques. Like the short man who packs a stiff punch, you put some of our verbosity to shame; excellent use of the prompt.
And now you have us wondering about that one word. Very clever! I also like the way you evoke so much within so few words.
Short and sweet, though I prefer rope myself. Smiles...>KB
So many little things I want to seek out within this write... the title really sets thee intrigue for the piece
wow!!! I love your title and the whole poem just captures the mind of my imagination.LOVE IT A LOT!
Ah, a lovely interruption in the evening
I am feeling the days without talking as Chinese water torture...the slow agonizing silence. So descriptive. Well done.
I especially love your concise write--less is more really works here.
Wow, that is quite extraordinary.....and the relationship sounds as if it could be described the same! I admire this very much.
Fabulous brevity here...
Very very nice! I like how this can be taken a number of different ways! :-)
It's not fair to use my dirty imagination in this way... Well done.
one word can have a lot of power...but so can tickles :-)
Ah.. but what is love but no words.. when scarves do tickle nerves of love..:)Ah.. but what is words but no love.. when nerves of love do starve to tickle..:)
Surprising and delightful, and saying just enough.
... awesome ... let's do it ... smiles
intense - nicely done in few words
Very effective--you write powerful poetry, X
Must be a pretty powerful word!
Cool response...a little mystery, playfulness, or a sudden urge that stirs one...
what a compelling write! i kept wondering what that one word was...the answer 'yes.' or perhaps 'love.'
Short and sexy response to the poetic prompt....leaving the mysterious word to the imagination. Nice.
one word is all it takes sometimes..very sensual..now where is my silk scarf...smiling.
wow, this is so intense - the effect you build with brevity. Love this one.
Amazing, a relationship based on sex only, irresistible at the time, but impossible to maintain.