Beautiful language here. 'Taste rain as your clouds' is lovely.
fileld with strong enotions
Sensuous and brilliant, and a very solid metaphor.
Rain has a taste all of its own. This is a love poem filled with feeling. Our lips and tongues are so sensitive to touch... Nice one! Love the lightning racing - wow!
Very very strong metaphor.. I read it several times, and each time I imagined different narratives.
Praise Jesus. You know how to spell "lightning." And that big fat "O" at the beginning says you must be good at other things too.
You disappeared on me again. Where do your words reside now, Friday. Checked out your friend Ann this morning.
She's cool, isn't she? She loves it when I disappear because she knows it means something fun is coming around the corner. At the moment, though, my words are just engaging in head-play.
can be magic when lightning strikes..tasting the rain on one lips can be sensual and pleasurable, I guess it depends on how we feel the rain.
I dig your work X - you don't mess around!
simple yet powerful
A beautifully intense piece :)
Energized with sensuality!
This is passionate and intense!mindlovemisery
So good with brief poetry, too--that multiplies/reproduces images.
The taste of rain............your poem brought my commenting to a pause as my brain went off on a tangent, dimly remembered, LOL.
Nice :) I wrote you back but didn't hear back..... I hope you are okay
Wowza.....this is one hot storm :-)
A wonderful poem....tasting rain as it splits across our senses.Donna@LivingFromHappiness
Lovely and nuanced - a lot of layers in these few words.
Lovely sounds in this especially--and a sense of homonyms--! k.
Works at many levels.. different images here.
Great power in this...and also some love.Thanks for visiting.
oh my goodness... so deeply intimate and love the images you use... the clouds, rain..some lightning just by reading...need to go back to bed...oy
"Shall I compare thee to a summers day?" better perhaps when it is more stormy?
you have wonderful insight. i bet your heart beats with every crack of thunder and every twitter of a leaf blowing in the windgracias
To the point, effectively.
absolutely sensual. that "O" has quite a meaning :)
WOW...this is so powerful...so utterly sensual...and multi-layered.Oh how I love this...:)
Very sensuous, evocative, sexy and oh yes metaphoric. Good writing!
I agree with Myrna. Love the metaphors.
I immediately thought about the discomfort, even revulsion, of dealing with that lightening. Many meanings layered here.
It could be tanka form, 5 lines.Lovely music, I can feel multiple refrain here...
I miss the sensuality of your words, smiles ~
Today I tasted the rain and immersed myself in the depths of clouds. Winter-summer in UK...Not so inspiring; but your poetic words, added a lively alternative view for me...Eileen
Oh, nice lines! Very intense! I like it :)
... this is heavenly.